Critique From Ian Waxler
Overall.. it's a wonderfully, professional quality production.. Obviously, you are very skilled at what you did here..
Of course you have solicited "critiques"... so no reason not to respond if I have no suggestions for any aspects that might be IMPROVED?
Some of the reads appear to be "produced" reads.. ie artificially imitated by someone..... especially some of the F/Ns??
I wonder whyThat basic outness found which will lead to a recovery of stats. (HCO PL 13 Oct 70 II)
you failed to inclue LF in between SF and LFBD? ....or was this an oversigt for this version perhaps...
Now I am not suggesting that everyone is going to be on board with every read you get here... only that if you keep getting on video more and more metering.. you will be able to isolate BETTER examples of any that are not exactly "perfect"?
ALl in all.. the great thing about your production is you have the ability to 'refine' it as improvements can be made.. Let me know if anything I might be able to do to help you in any ways... ok?
thanks.. and best of luck on it... Ian Waxler, Class VIIIThe Class VIII Course teaches exact handling of all cases up to 100 per cent result, as well as Class VIII procedures, all case setup actions, all processes and corrective actions, as well as flubless Class VIII auditing. (Dianetics and Scientology Technical Dictionary (C) 1975)
Ian, Thanks for your kind words, coming from you it means a lot! I had put in the LF but it's not there, so I will fix that (again). It was an oversight on my part, not a willfull omission.
The F/N's actually are from my Solo NOTSNew Era Dianetics for OT's. Done in two main sections after OT III. Audited NOTS (OT V) and Solo NOTS (OT VI & VII with OT VI being the course that trains the pre-OT how to solo audit NOTS) Note: OT IV is the OT Drug Rundown done after OT III. sessions and aren't manufactured but do seem to get the most criticism, lol. Maybe it's the rendering of the video that makes them wonky? I will continue to make them or new ones look more representative of what you guys expect. It's not been an easy task. I didn't expect it to be though. It takes a ton of confront to do this I've come to realize, more than even I thought.
I will be sending out continual revisions until I can get a balance of approval, so thanks for your patience.
Ml,
Jonathan Burke
Advanced Organization of the Great Plains
