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Currently the first paragraph reads...
Unfortunately, the history of L. Ron Hubbard’s Church of Scientology is not one of honoring and supporting its best and most productive peoples. Church doctrine says it is supposed to, but in actual practice history demonstrates that its best and brightest producers were routinely sabotaged by upper management and even LRHL. Ron Hubbard and his wife MSH. Indeed, today, one can learn of Hubbard’s original deceitful and destructive intent for the enterprise he created; this from his own writings and spoken words such as his “Affirmations” and personal correspondence.
This is a lot of opinion and the story does not contain a lot of fact to back this up. The language is rather charged for not containing facts.
I recommend deleting this paragraph as it doesn't contain the Neutral Point of View (NPV) of a wiki and also does not contain a single verifiable claim, but rather generalities.
The second paragraph reads like a one sided story.
RECOMMENDED CHANGE:
L. Hubbard and Mary Sue Hubbard and had Alan's multiple Mission operations taken from him by deceit, according to the ESMB account "Alan" (Provide a link to the user's profile page on ESMB). She says she witnessed a piece of paper on Ron's desk that showed ... etc.
In a wiki, we cannot slander one side by assuming everything one source says is the absolute truth. Again, we present the accurate truths that we know from a Neutral Point of View (NPV).
Please review Wikipedia's definition of a NPV.
